To begin with…. this blog owes its origin to the insistence of a friend.Rishta meaning relationship, & for me who has a tremendous faith in it, my blog cudn’t find a better name.
I have no great intellectual thought to be conveyed .But its a bit of literature that I pen, is what I intend to share over this space.I pen my emotions and I believe its the best way for my self-expression.Its not an intentional writting often, but a natural flow of feelings.So,poetry happens to be a part of me, allowing me to sketch a replica of myself through the form of words also helpful in self-discovery,which I immensely enjoy doing!
ABOUT MYSELF:
My name is Pushpa Venkatesha Murthy.Academically a 4th year Law student form Bangalore .An aspiring writter.Working on my collection to be published very soon. Extremely passionate about Literature,Music & Theater! Creativity,Simplicity & Emotions is what I’m embodied with.
The peekers are requested to drop in a comment over what they feel over the write ups.CRITICS are most welcome!
DISCLAIMER: Every content on this blog is self written & no copying of the same by the readers is entertained.
i was goin through ur blog and found wonderfull words penned in ……..
wonderfull thoughts …..
hope to see more in near future ……..
Admirer
ah.. nice to hear such encouraging words! U’ll surely have more to be read! Just keep peeking in!
just wanted to say good luck with your blog! Its an honest attempt to put ur thoughts and feelings in words thats for sure, simplicity and genuinity being the high lights.. i do believe it is hard to define emotions for its sheer intricacy and it is importent to use the right set of word to express what you want to say lest you give the reader a wrong or a distorted image.. also i believe you have a long way to go. Emily Dickinson said poetry is”the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings;” , spontaneous and powerful it is.but as a reader and a friend i take the liberty to also be your critique and what i find lagging in your work is what i look for in poetry- lucidity, rythm and depth. Also i Believe the use of more polished or rather poetic words will add flair to your work. SMS language is definitly a no no ! also rhyming is not at all a criterion for poetry!! CHOOSE YOUR WORDS WITH UTMOST CARE..
you have enormous potential ! All the best again…and finally i would like to quote Keats “Beauty is truth. Truth, beauty.
That is all ye know on Earth and all ye need to know.”
hey ganges,
thanks a ton for the feed back!
Like you know… perspective always differs and again it differs from you and me! I would surely keep in mind the things you cared to point out.U’ll notice that next time you blog here!
thanks again!
Really its a gud blog dude. Keep on going.
Phir usi chand se rista bana baite,
phir usi saadgi se fareb kha baite,
pathron se tha taalukaat hamara,
phir bhee sheeshe ka ghar bana baite
Munna
Dont TRY to FIX me, I am not BROKEN!
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thanks buddy! hope to see u around often!
It’s too gud to read ur thaught’s now i reallize dat there is also another way 2 xprss ur feelings. Thanx buddy…
Hello. . .
Nice to visit your blog. . . your creations. . . Keep it continue. . . . Will visit again. . .
sure will.
Nice blog !!!
thanks buddy
hello rst
Your kismat touch my heart
well… I feel honoured on hearing that!
b/w my name is Pushpa!
hi..
i felt that ur “we came close for the reasons unknown” was top notch..
i really hope to see many more poems like that.
keep up the good job.
take care.
@ Nikhil,
glad to knw u liked my reasons unknown!
sure u will hav more to be read! Keep peeking in
hey, u know manali by any chance?
r u refering to the place or person?!
A person, in fact a girl.
ahhhh… guess I do! Hav a junior in clg with that name!
But y u ask?!
plzz don make big deal out of it. but she had sent me ur poem “The Reasons Unknown”. it was only a few days back i happened to see ur blog, then realised it she fwded it frm here.
actually she had fwded ur poem ” The Reasons Unknown” a few months back..
Nikhil,
I have sent u a mail. I would appreciate if u could revert!
thanks
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pls email kijiye…
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band hoto ki sargam se ek saaz chheda jana chahiye,
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lekin aapke alfazo ko seene se lagaya jana chahiye…”
kuch shabd dil ki dhadkan ko kuch pal ke liye hi kyon na ho rok dete hai…..aapme me wo huunar hain jo ye kaam kare..
keep it up…nice writing….
Shukriya
Humare lafz kisi ke dil tak pohoonchi hai sun ke khushi hui!
so nice